I really enjoyed the exhibition and I learned a lot from it. I learned how violent gaming is such a big problem, especially for younger and teenage students. The graph was very helpful for the viewers to compare and contrast the statistics. Having a primary source is very helpful. Keep up with this because you will need this skill for the IB! great job! However I believe you should have collected for perspective from other other point of views. For example, I realised you only included the negative comments for video games rather than the positive views. However, having both views would allow the audience to get a glimpse of why videogames are very popular even though you have already explained this. This give you more evidence! Otherwise I am very impressed!
I really enjoyed the exhibition and I learned a lot from it. I learned how violent gaming is such a big problem, especially for younger and teenage students. The graph was very helpful for the viewers to compare and contrast the statistics. Having a primary source is very helpful. Keep up with this because you will need this skill for the IB! great job! However I believe you should have collected for perspective from other other point of views. For example, I realised you only included the negative comments for video games rather than the positive views. However, having both views would allow the audience to get a glimpse of why videogames are very popular even though you have already explained this. This give you more evidence! Otherwise I am very impressed!
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